Too Many Words?

I was told today that my writing is too wordy, and I cannot disagree. In fact I do agree, and wholeheartedly so. I love words. I love writing them and I enjoy playing with them. I am reminded of the film,. "Amadeus," where Antonio Salieri, Mozart's rival composer, said of one of Mozart's new pieces, "Too many notes."

Well, not that I would ever have the audacity to compare myself to Mozart, but there is one thing we share; like him, I probably won't change my writing style because I'm told I use too many words.

I was told that Dr Seuss gave the writing advice, "Brevity, brevity, brevity!"

I wonder why he said it three times when one would have sufficed.

Blessings,

John 

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